The Unwilling Protagonist
I, on a Friday night, decided to go watch a movie at 9:30 pm. It was in a theater that was once
home to an older, grander theater that got torn down and replaced with a new one where
everything is automated from tickets to drinks. It was usually pretty empty on the weekends, so that
was the best time to go there. The look of the theater was like any place remaking an older
building; A clean, bland corporate look that is as lifeless as a morgue. Its smell always seems to
be sterile despite how much popcorn and soda gets spilled on a daily basis. Oh well, At
least the seats were made of fine leather where my back can finally have something to rest on.
While everyone was either staying at home or drinking somewhere, me, whose roommate was
off with his friends, completely without warning went to see a movie alone. I came to the theater
feeling relieved to be doing something that wasn’t work or shopping. I pay my ticket at the
machine that always looked like an atm to me. Once in the theater, I grabbed a soda and picked
the best spot since I was the only person that showed up that night.
The movie I chose to watch was a rerun of a movie that came out a while ago. It was about a
child trying to find his parents while being haunted by a ghost. It got great ratings back then, and
I was planning on seeing it when it first came out, but I had to take my cat to the vet which made me
broke for the rest of the month. Damn cat! Anyway, when it was re-released, I took my chance
to see it.
The movie started well as they introduced the protagonist “Timmy”, a short 10-year-old boy
wrapped around layers of clothing, and his predicament of finding his parents, and how it
perfectly introduces the villainous spirit haunting poor little Timmy. I liked the character of Timmy
and the look of the spirit as well. It’s just that the tension was not there when it needed it the
most. Whenever there was a chance for a heart pounding chase scene, the ghost merely stalks
and when the movie does do the first chase scene, the ghost is too far away and too slow to feel
like Timmy was in any sort of real danger of being caught.
By the halfway mark of the movie, Timmy had found a transcript from a person who tried, but
failed to enact the ritual to defeat the evil spirit along with the location to enact it. Just as the
movie transitioned to the next scene, something strange happened. I felt a tinge of coldness on
my cheeks. I knew it was late, but the weather was still warm outside, and the theater had air
conditioning. That coldness stuck to my face like frozen greasy slime. As uncomfortable as I
was, I’ve been subjected to much colder temperatures, so I was willing to ignore it for the sake
of finishing the movie. I then caught a glimpse of some black anomaly. At first, I didn’t pay much
Mind, but then I caught another one from the corner of the eye. I looked at the theater but found
no one was there. I chalked it up to my paranoia; something I thought was a weakness.
I return to the movie as Timmy finds himself in a dilapidated hotel where he must enact the
ritual. As the movie shows Timmy walking into the reception, I heard faint, incoherent whispers. I
looked behind me once again and there was nothing. Then, my phone rang at the same time as
a cell phone rang in the movie. I looked to silence my phone when I noticed the name of the
person who was calling me. “Timmy.”
There was no one named Timmy in my contacts and anyone else would either be labeled as
“scam likely” or would just be the phone number. I decided, out of curiosity, to answer the call.
“Hello there.” I spoke. “Hel..hello. Can you help me?” Not only did the voice sound like a child, but
I heard the voice in the theater. When I looked at the screen, Timmy was on the phone too. I was
extremely weirded out and confused with what was happening. “What’s your name.”
“Ti…ti…Timmy ”. The voice on the phone matched the dialogue in the movie.
I was shocked, I did not take any substances tonight and I had never been mentally ill in my life.
I couldn’t have been making this up in my head. Yet I was directly talking to Timmy, a fictional
movie character. I did not know what to say. In fact, it felt like I couldn’t move. It felt like I was tied
underneath with invisible chains. Heavy, I felt heavy. My body felt that it was being crushed.
The camera showed the outside of the hotel where the evil spirit represented by blackish red
mist and an accumulation of moans of people cursed long ago. When I saw it, I yelled “RUN!” to
Timmy and he dashed into the hotel with the phone in hand.
Timmy ran into the halls of the hotel as the whispers from before came back with low, dark
voices calling for my violent, painful death. The movie’s camera cut the end of the hall where the
spirit was waiting for Timmy. “STOP!” I yelled on the phone. Timmy stopped at his tracks when I
said those words. I then told Timmy, “Go take the next door on the left.” I told him, not knowing if I was
sending him to his doom. Luckily, the room Timmy entered had a hole in the wall where it led to
the staircase that Timmy needed to go to complete the ritual. The poor child ran to the staircase
as the camera panned to the spirit sensing Timmy’s movement and went to stop the kid.
In the theater, I saw the shape of dark, indescribable figures in the rows ahead of me. The forms
started to take up more rows as the whispers grew louder, more threatening than before. I felt
like I was suffocating under the insidious invisible force that held my body. Timmy had gotten to
the room where he could perform the ritual. I remembered in an early exposition that blood minerals
can temporarily ward off the spirit.
I panic as the camera shows the shadow of the spirit’s misty form coming down the hall as it
unleashes a hideous screech that brought unimaginable pain to my ears. It was only by the
grace of the camera that revealed the crushed stones near Timmy. “See the stones to the right?
Grab it and spread it across the doorway.” I told Timmy in a strained voice. Timmy saw the rocks
and quickly grabbed them. As the Spirit charged towards Timmy with a vengeance, Timmy
spread the minerals across as much as possible to create a greater barrier between him and the
spirit.
With the barrier now in place, the spirit was stopped at the doorway. The faces of the people to
who the mist has consumed repeating long forgotten cries for help. Timmy was taken aback
and fell behind watching the horrors right in front of me. Needing to snap Timmy out of it to save
him and myself, I yelled at him on the phone that took most of my remaining energy from me.
“Focus on the fucking ritual!” Right after my yelling, Timmy got to work getting the ritual done.
As he was working on the ritual, the whispers from behind me became shouting of my
damnation as more and more figures appeared in all the seats of the theater. I begged Timmy to
go faster as my voice became weaker with each passing second. Meanwhile, the red mist
representing the spirit was slowly but surely breaking the barrier. By the time Timmy got to
performing the ritual, the spirit was more than half way from breaking the barrier.
My remaining strength grew weaker, and my ears bled from the screaming. I pray for Timmy to
be successful as my eyes grow weaker. I saw that the spirit coming close to the barrier as my
consciousness slowly slipped. Using whatever strength I had left in me I kept my eyes from
shutting for good.
Just as my eyes started to close for the final time as the spirit broke through the barrier, a
shining light blinded me as Timmy finished the ritual. When I opened my eyes, I felt like the weight
of 20 red bricks were lifted from my chest. The theater’s lights were on as the credits rolled from
the screen. If I could have run far away, I would have, but my body had yet to recover from the
experience. Which meant I had to move slowly towards the exit. Looking back at the screen
before I walked through the door, the credits showed my name, alongside Timmy’s.
Name: Paul Pham
Bio: Hello, my name is Paul Pham, I'm a freshman majoring in creative writing. I am excited to get my short ghost story published. Huge credit for my mom for helping me edit my story.